Needs a bit of polish
This is a great start and shows great potential, but there is a bit of polish and dust up you need to do that can definately help. Just a observation, it just sounds a bit unfinished to me, still a great piece though, don't get me wrong.
good work keep it up
Thanks for the good review
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